tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post8613367085448581195..comments2023-07-02T10:28:22.545-04:00Comments on Author Evelyn Jules: Weekend Writing Warriors #1! Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-84607727823956671162013-02-24T15:51:12.861-05:002013-02-24T15:51:12.861-05:00I'm getting a bad visual of Mucosa, such a sli...I'm getting a bad visual of Mucosa, such a slimy warrior. lolTeresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-68744485562544216062013-02-07T10:33:42.947-05:002013-02-07T10:33:42.947-05:00Hee! As long as you're not snorting for anothe...Hee! As long as you're not snorting for another reason. ;) Thanks, Elin! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-88249960727183824392013-02-07T05:08:17.293-05:002013-02-07T05:08:17.293-05:00Emitting loud snorts of mirth here! Well done.Emitting loud snorts of mirth here! Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-55983051490678902802013-02-06T07:41:08.838-05:002013-02-06T07:41:08.838-05:00Aww, thank you so much, Sarah! So thrilled you enj...Aww, thank you so much, Sarah! So thrilled you enjoyed it! :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-4628067631245588082013-02-06T00:32:49.729-05:002013-02-06T00:32:49.729-05:00I enjoyed this, but particularly loved the name of...I enjoyed this, but particularly loved the name of the ships. Wicked-clever!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-17624139478879915032013-02-03T21:35:13.866-05:002013-02-03T21:35:13.866-05:00Surprise! New story. :D Thanks for checking it out...Surprise! New story. :D Thanks for checking it out, Anastasia! More next week!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-77664216621741302642013-02-03T21:28:34.546-05:002013-02-03T21:28:34.546-05:00It took a brain shift to realize this is a new sto...It took a brain shift to realize this is a new story. Interested to see how this one turns out!Anastasia Vitskyhttp://governingana.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-74667398205995959762013-02-03T17:20:32.277-05:002013-02-03T17:20:32.277-05:00Yay! So, so happy you're enjoying it, Veronica...Yay! So, so happy you're enjoying it, Veronica! Thanks for stopping by! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-4929129059837514082013-02-03T17:09:28.942-05:002013-02-03T17:09:28.942-05:00Pretty funny! Trying to imagine where this story g...Pretty funny! Trying to imagine where this story goes next LOL. Terrific snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-12005703880492275012013-02-03T16:42:41.920-05:002013-02-03T16:42:41.920-05:00Thanks, Sue! I'd love to publish this one some...Thanks, Sue! I'd love to publish this one someday. Maybe as a children's book. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-82102839038320205702013-02-03T16:37:28.501-05:002013-02-03T16:37:28.501-05:00Wonderful personification of a cold.Wonderful personification of a cold.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-55161918311134369052013-02-03T16:11:07.356-05:002013-02-03T16:11:07.356-05:00Thank you so much, Elaine! I appreciate you taking...Thank you so much, Elaine! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-40534082849039887832013-02-03T16:07:51.234-05:002013-02-03T16:07:51.234-05:00Great characterization.Great characterization.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-53772745247819880242013-02-03T15:55:51.678-05:002013-02-03T15:55:51.678-05:00You showed us his character in these few sentences...You showed us his character in these few sentences. Nice.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-40364861416043519392013-02-03T13:25:34.052-05:002013-02-03T13:25:34.052-05:00If I told you whose POV it's in, that would to...If I told you whose POV it's in, that would totally spoil the story. So you'll have to stay tuned for that. ;) Thank you so much for commenting, Siobhan! In my mind, the ships are like spaceships, but we're not exactly in outer space here. Somewhere much darker and much scarier. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-51314328401751425992013-02-03T13:05:09.136-05:002013-02-03T13:05:09.136-05:00Interesting beginning, Evelyn. Who's POV are w...Interesting beginning, Evelyn. Who's POV are we in? Obviously someone looking at the commander. I kept thinking outer space by your ship descriptions. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-78222768707782381162013-02-03T12:12:58.086-05:002013-02-03T12:12:58.086-05:00Hee! Thanks, Mags! I knew you'd remember it to...Hee! Thanks, Mags! I knew you'd remember it too! :D I had so much fun writing it. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-85801069863512698452013-02-03T12:07:04.653-05:002013-02-03T12:07:04.653-05:00Ha! I remember The Cold War! This is aweseome!Ha! I remember The Cold War! This is aweseome!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01289197658424725914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-19939395317784495252013-02-03T10:45:06.044-05:002013-02-03T10:45:06.044-05:00That's exactly what I wanted to hear! Thank yo...That's exactly what I wanted to hear! Thank you so much, Marcia! I'm grinning from ear to ear. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-37818961724466765162013-02-03T10:40:40.216-05:002013-02-03T10:40:40.216-05:00hahaha! You really did make me LOL! Great descript...hahaha! You really did make me LOL! Great descriptions. This one's got a future in print *somewhere*! :DMarciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-89454541692608683012013-02-03T10:16:23.115-05:002013-02-03T10:16:23.115-05:00I knew you'd remember, Laurie. :D Thanks for r...I knew you'd remember, Laurie. :D Thanks for reading again. I'm thinking of entering this story in an upcoming contest, so I'm running it past another audience. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-85411772388161629442013-02-03T10:09:24.350-05:002013-02-03T10:09:24.350-05:00Ha! I remember this. So very clever. :) You guys t...Ha! I remember this. So very clever. :) You guys think Russian, I think Star Trek, Klingons or maybe Cardasians. ;)Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07320746523009904998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-11095733069938242872013-02-03T09:35:28.628-05:002013-02-03T09:35:28.628-05:00I thought the names were a giveaway too, but when ...I thought the names were a giveaway too, but when I initially wrote this a few people were stumped until the end. lol, you're not the first to think of Olfacto as Russian. So, so thrilled with your reaction! I'll share more next week! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-29831406045074705692013-02-03T09:32:50.757-05:002013-02-03T09:32:50.757-05:00Thank you so much, Cerian! So glad you're enjo...Thank you so much, Cerian! So glad you're enjoying it! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6268724092019920777.post-58071662372313695762013-02-03T06:42:19.690-05:002013-02-03T06:42:19.690-05:00I love where this seems to be going *grins widely*...I love where this seems to be going *grins widely* - the names are the give away, I think, and they are wonderful. And I, too, like the description of Olfacto. I've already made him Russian in my head, somehow that seems to fit with what I think he is as well as the title. Can't wait for more.Kizzia https://www.blogger.com/profile/13033284940593354024noreply@blogger.com