Hello and Happy Sunday to you!! :)
I'm participating in Six Sentence Sunday once again. This excerpt is from my current WIP, called 'Borderline Lovers'. It's possible it's based on a true story. ;) Enjoy!
I'm participating in Six Sentence Sunday once again. This excerpt is from my current WIP, called 'Borderline Lovers'. It's possible it's based on a true story. ;) Enjoy!
“Citizenship?” he asked.
She cocked her head to the side and
studied him. Smooth, straight nose with a slight bump on the bridge, eyelashes
that made her ache with envy, wavy jet-black hair that begged a girl to get all
tangled up in…“Hmmm, I would guess either Greek or Spanish.”
“I meant you.”
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Hee, that's funny. "I meant you." That little line made me laugh. :)) Also, anytime I read about eyelashes I think of a certain diner owner. Good luck on your WIP. It sounds delish.
ReplyDeleteHee! I love making people laugh. This story has taken on a definite comedic tone, but I kind of love it a lot. :D Thank you so much for commenting, Laurie! Stay tuned for next week's excerpt!
DeleteThat's cute! Great six!
ReplyDelete:) Thank you, JM! So glad you enjoyed! I'm off to read yours!!
DeleteLove it! Can't wait to read it!
ReplyDeleteThank you! You can read it anytime, baby! ;)
DeleteYou are very good at this. I'm completely captivated already, trying to figure out how Madison and the black-haired Spaniard and/or Greek god met. Six sentences are not enough!
ReplyDeleteAll a part of my evil plan! Mwahahaha! :D I'm so thrilled you're enjoying these excerpts. This particular story takes place at the border between Windsor, Ontario and Detroit, Michigan. That might help to fill in some blanks. ;)
DeleteTangled up in his hair, hmmmmm. Lovely visual sentence.
ReplyDeleteThis is my face: :D Thank you so much for commenting and visiting my blog!
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