“We’re not
going to make it.”
The deafening
boom and terrifying silence that followed confirmed Olfacto’s worst fear. “Mucosa!” he cried. “Noooooooo!”
Ashen faces
stared at my father, our commander. A strange calm overtook the panic surging
through the ship. A few courageous souls murmured a soft, “God bless you.”
The Rhinovirus
had reached The Cavity, and there we remained, hidden amongst the spongy matter
that lined the floor.
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Is this an INNERSPACE kind of adventure? Hm. Your voice is certainly quirky! Top o' the muffin to you too...and down here in Chicagoland, the snow isn't going anywhere either :(
ReplyDeleteIt's more of an INNERNOSE kind of adventure. ;) Maybe, eventually, before spring is over, we might get rid of this snow. Let's cross our fingers! Thanks so much for stopping by! :)
DeleteI am continually amazed at the twists and turns of this fun story - terrific snippet!
ReplyDeleteI am continually flattered by your compliments, Veronica! Thank you so much! :)
DeleteLove the snippet. great description here.
ReplyDelete~Summer
My 8
Thanks very much, Summer! Off to check out your 8! :)
DeleteGoodness. Does that mean what I think it means? How awful. A virus is a dangerous opponent. May Mucosa and the others rest in peace.
ReplyDeleteWell, Mucosa and his crew are viruses too. They gotta die sometime, but I'll be sure to pass on your sympathies. ;) Thanks so much for reading, Kate!
DeleteWell, once the virus settles in, everybody's screwed! LOL I love this - so unique. Welcome back to the frozen north. :-p
ReplyDeleteHee, exactly! So happy you're enjoying it! I'm quite ready to leave this frozen country now. :P
DeleteQuirky and fun. Nice 8.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Elaine! I appreciate it! :)
DeleteGezundheit. Love this!
ReplyDeleteThanks, sweets! :)
DeleteI never thought I'd be sympathetic to a virus. Love this!
ReplyDeleteHee, thank you so much! Makes you feel for the little guys, doesn't it? ;)
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