Okay, so about my new story. I wrote a quick and dirty hockey story a while back called Body Check. I'm making some edits on it now and will be subbing it in the near future. Here's the premise: Alicia Holden is like the hugest hockey fan evah and has a major crush on hockey hunk, Mike Converset. She ends up winning a dinner with him in an online charity auction, and the two meet up in his hotel room...where there is also a bed. And it's always nice to make use of beds when they're just there lookin' all comfy and stuff. So yeah. In this scene they're making use of the king-size bed....
The weight of him pressing against her felt like
heaven. She rocked her hips.
“Stats,” he blurted. “Gimme some stats.”
Beads of sweat gathered on his forehead. He was right
on the edge, and she was the one who brought him there. A surge of pride rushed
through her blood. “One-hundred-and-six points in seventy-five games this
season.”
Hope you enjoyed! Have a delightful day and be sure to visit the other Weekend Writing Warriors! :)
A hockey story - how appropriate for the Stanley Cup Playoffs! [GO LEAFS!!] :-D
ReplyDeleteThe old trick about quoting stats made me smile. Good thing Alicia knew some.
Always enjoy your excerpts. Hope the stats worked.
I thought so too. :D Always enjoy your excerpts as well, Debbie! Thanks for stopping by! I'm off to read yours! :)
DeleteWe love Great Wolf Lodge too! It is an awesome place. While I'm not much of a hockey fan, I really like the snippet. Every guy has his way of stalling, and this one is great
ReplyDeleteIt SO is! I'm definitely going back as soon as I can. It's especially pleasing to know you enjoyed the excerpt despite your dislike for hockey. I won't judge. ;)
DeleteSo cute. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Elaine! So happy you enjoyed it! :)
DeleteCute that she is giving him hockey stats. Sounds like another winner.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Laurie! I'll share a little more next week! :)
DeleteFun little scene! Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica! I always appreciate your feedback! :)
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