Sunday, July 15, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday!

Gooood morning, friends! 


I've always believed that sharing is caring, which is precisely why I'm participating in Six Sentence Sunday! This excerpt is from a mime/clown wedding story I recently completed, called 'All Action, No Talk'. Hope you enjoy!


He looked nothing and everything like the man she’d grown to love, all put together in a suit and tie, shy and vulnerable and beautiful.
“You’re here.” Her voice cracked on the last word and she hated that more than the idiotic statement itself.
He nodded and his grin deepened, sharpening the lines that bracketed his mouth, lines that told the tale of a thousand soundless stories.
She closed the distance between them but stopped just shy of launching herself at him. Probably not the best thing for an almost-married lady to be doing with a man that she wasn’t almost-marrying but wished to heaven she was.  
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12 comments:

  1. Wow. That last sentence was a shocker! Makes me want to find out more. :) Love the blog!

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    1. Thank you so much for stopping by, Sondrae! So happy you enjoyed it! This excerpt is from a story I'm hoping will be part of a wedding anthology. Stay tuned! :)

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  2. Oh intrigue. Now I am left wondering does the fella ever speak? I will have to wait and see won't I? ;)

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    1. But of course, my dear. ;) I can't give away all my secrets. Intrigue, what every author hopes for. :x

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  3. Awesome, as usual! I so LOVE your writing!
    Mwah!

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    1. Thank you so much, Maria! You're so sweet to say so! I love your writing too! :x

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  4. Geez, but those were six sizzling, sensational sentences! Please, may I have six more?

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    1. Hee, thank you! You'll have to wait till next Sunday, my friend! ;)

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  5. Very nice and you have me very interested. I likey.

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    1. Woohooo! Glad to hear it! Thanks for commenting, Michelle!! :D

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